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Just another Brick in the Wall





Just another Brick in the Wall...

(shot near Chilika Lake,  intentionally not keeping the subject in focus)


Let me get lost in the crowd
Enough tried to be stronger and proud
Let me get dissolved
Be a brick in the wall.

Never been so negative in life
Not seeing any light this time
Every road has reached its end
There’s no way amicable to mend

Let me be just amongst the trillions
Enough tried to outshine the millions
Let me get dissolved
Be a brick in the wall.




[Wrote these utterly pessimistic lines keeping the old man disappearing in his background. Don't have exact idea, but I wasn't able to keep myself in his 'probable' mind setup and think positively]



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  1. Deguide10 March 2011 at 10:09

    Nice share of photo.....only single photo let down Lolz

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  2. Unknown10 March 2011 at 10:58

    So dark, but liked it... I know you can write rhyme too.... go ahead and rock with your hilarious thoughts with simple words.....

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  3. Ghumakkar Punit10 March 2011 at 11:04

    @Deguide-- Glad that you like the post, all the pictures from our Chilika trip can be viewed here...
    https://picasaweb.google.com/itzpyunit/ChilikaLakeOdisha?feat=directlink

    @Abhishek--Thanku! :)

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  4. Agnivo10 March 2011 at 12:36

    Why is this poem so sad? :(

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